jessica falcus | 16-Dec-08 at 12:26 pm | Permalink
the city scape works really well, i also like the bit by bit jerky motion of the animation.
the backdrop keeps the piece soft almost like the construction which runs smoothly.
is it saying a city can be built up just as easy as it can be brought down??
the piece is well structured as we are in a mechanical age.
for me the only thing i would have changed is the text ‘LEEDS,’ which appears in the top left corner of the animation. i know it links to the brief, however it is obvious that the piece is based around a city without documenting it is ‘leeds.’
however i think it is a really well developed animation they arn’t easily put together. well done x
Thank you very much for the comments, they mean alot to me.
Yeah it is supposed to show that as quick as a city is built it is as easily demolished. I also agree about the text, I wasn’t too keen and will probably remove it when I do my remix.
A really cool way of making a short story as well as an animation. The building of the city, followed by its deconstruction, evryone can think up their own reasons why this is happening! Fantastic!
i think this is a great piece where alot of time and effort has been put in and its worth it. the background sun lit sky works perfectly and the harsh contrast against the black looks fresh and clean. i like that it builds up and breaks down…its like a cylce…like everything in life. good job
jessica falcus | 16-Dec-08 at 12:26 pm | Permalink
the city scape works really well, i also like the bit by bit jerky motion of the animation.
the backdrop keeps the piece soft almost like the construction which runs smoothly.
is it saying a city can be built up just as easy as it can be brought down??
the piece is well structured as we are in a mechanical age.
for me the only thing i would have changed is the text ‘LEEDS,’ which appears in the top left corner of the animation. i know it links to the brief, however it is obvious that the piece is based around a city without documenting it is ‘leeds.’
however i think it is a really well developed animation they arn’t easily put together. well done x
MatthewH | 16-Dec-08 at 12:26 pm | Permalink
This is a work of genius. That crane looks so cool, I want one on my wall at home. Very relevant to the current building boom.
CaraB | 16-Dec-08 at 2:10 pm | Permalink
this is amaaazing, really nice piece of work!
Karen | 16-Dec-08 at 5:57 pm | Permalink
Thank you very much for the comments, they mean alot to me.
Yeah it is supposed to show that as quick as a city is built it is as easily demolished. I also agree about the text, I wasn’t too keen and will probably remove it when I do my remix.
Thanx guys & gals x
RoyW | 16-Dec-08 at 9:51 pm | Permalink
A really cool way of making a short story as well as an animation. The building of the city, followed by its deconstruction, evryone can think up their own reasons why this is happening! Fantastic!
StephB | 17-Dec-08 at 12:41 pm | Permalink
i think this is a great piece where alot of time and effort has been put in and its worth it. the background sun lit sky works perfectly and the harsh contrast against the black looks fresh and clean. i like that it builds up and breaks down…its like a cylce…like everything in life. good job
MoAs | 17-Dec-08 at 10:38 pm | Permalink
This is great Karen! So precise and fluid….like how it ressembles Leeds at the moment and many cities really. Can tell you put loads of time into it!